Essays-Mr.Cogan

Invisible by Paul Walsh and Donncha McHugh. It started off like a normal day. It was a sunny day. There wasn't a cloud to be seen in the sky. I was walking happily to school with Jimmy. I was ecstatic as our school were going to New York zoo. We were running late. By the time we had got to school the bus was ready to leave. We had to sit right up the front because we were late. When we arrived at the zoo, we visited many animals such as lions, tigers, elephants and many more. We were allowed in with the chameleons. As one was creeping up my shoulder I felt a little pinch on my right arm. I didn't think anything of it at the time. On the way back on the bus I felt weak and ended up fainting. The next thing I remember I woke up in my bed. The following day after school I was home alone. As I came in the gate I  noticed that the door had been forced in. I moved cautiously into the house. I saw someone in the house with a hoody as black as coal on him. I went to punch him in the head. As I closed my fist I turned invisible. I was so shocked when I found out. I thought I was hallucinating. I had figured out that when I closed my fists I could turn invisible. I picked up a baseball bat. All the robber could see was a  floating bat. He ran out of the house crying like a baby shouting “Don't kill me, please” My mom came home. I said “hello” but she didn’t see me. She started yelling there’s a ghost. She thought she was going mad.  I sprinted up to my room and opened my fist I was visible again. The next day I decided to make myself a superhero suit. My name was Invisible man. My best friend Jimmy became Spider Man. Jimmy was a small fat man around 5ft2. He had bright red hair, crooked teeth and massive eyes. He was fifteen, one year older than me. We were known as “The Dynamic Duo”. We had two main enemies, Johnny aka Electro and Harrison aka Goblin. Johnny was a tall man with hair as white as snow. He was in his mid fifties. He had big white hairs coming out of his nose. He spoke with a really high voice . Harrison was the complete opposite. He was a fat man with silk black hair. He was in his mid twenties. His face was covered in spots. He spoke with a real deep voice. One day when Jimmy was strolling down the street they ambushed him, sent a bullet through his brain, killing him instantly and shocked his heart to bring him back to life. He became “The Electric Spider”. Now I was the only good guy. I battled them in a heroic fight and killed Electro and Goblin in New York city but Jimmy got away. I spent weeks tracking down Jimmy. Eventually I found out where he was hiding. I had to get some back up. I teamed up with the Avengers while Jimmy teamed up with Ultron, Venom and  Carnage who were villains. I sneaked into the warehouse where they were hiding before we all went in. I gave  them the old “One, two, three, Avengers Assemble” and they all busted into the warehouse. There were punches flying everywhere. Everyone was dead on their team and only Hawkeye was dead on ours. I said “Leave this guy to me”. All the Avengers left the building. It was hard for me to kill Jimmy. But I had to do it. With that I said “You should have become a good guy” and jammed my blade into his heart. It was the most painful thing I had ever done. A week later I attended Jimmy’s funeral. I stayed by his grave for the whole night. I had lost so many people in my life my dad, my mum and now Jimmy. I hung up my suit and said “ When the time’s right I’ll use it again”. I saw on the television that there was a new villain in town his name was Thomas The Tank Engine. So I went down to the centre of the city, killed him and said “ It’s good to be back.

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INVISIBLE by Cathal McHale

On a rainy day there was a boy named John. He wasn’t like any other boy, as he had special power that nobody knew that he had, until one day a group of bullies came to pick on him. He got really scared and ran away.  But as he was running, he slipped and fell into some mud. The bullies came, picked John up and hit him hard.  When he got home to his mom, she asked what happened to him and why he was all dirty. He explained everything and she got angry. He didn’t sleep that night and he kept thinking about them and he got soooo frustrated that the next morning when he was on his way to school he stopped and waited for the bullies to come. At first all of his classmates didn’t know what he was doing but when the bullies came he stood there without moving. They came towards him. The bullies started to mock him by saying “watch out for the mud pile again” and they all giggled. 
As soon as they were right in front of him, he said “Pick on someone your own size”. They all mocked him and then  ran at him, they threw the first punch but with all the rage he disappeared into nowhere. He  started messin’ with the bullies and then started to hit them, of course they couldn’t see him so he had the advantage. When he finished, he was visible again and said “You still wanna mess with me?” then the bullies ran home crying and screaming “I WANT MY MOMMY!” Later the bullies struck back and started bullying the younger kids, but then John came and saved the day. One day an FBI agent came and saw John doing his thing [going invisible]. She saw him doing it and she asked how did he do it he replied and said “I fell into a mud pile and got these powers. She asked him to go with her and he did. When the van stopped the FBI agent asked John to put on a blindfold, he did. As they go in, the boss asked what is he doing here? She answered he is the one with the nuclear power. He couldn’t be the boss how I thought I got rid of it all! "Clearly not" said the FBI. She took off the blindfold and said to John "Don’t be afraid he is a good guy.” So John did his thing and the boss was utterly astonished with this act of madness and sad wow!!!. The next day the FBI the boss had a chat and they said, we have to got that out of him or he’ll die! how long does he have it for, he has it for about a week, that could be a big problem if he has it for another week find him and bring him here!  
The FBI agent went to find him, she did.when she brought him back to the lab they tied him up and started taking the nuclear wast out of him and while that was in progress a group of men came into the lab and tried to take it over to get the waste. the FBI were too strong for them so the FBI agents took back what was rightfully theirs and then all of the waste was out of him and he was free he could go invisible but no bad stuff in him.
THE END!

Invisible by Cillian Cooke
It was a normal day for young Cillian Cooke in Castlebar, Ireland. It was pelting rain even though it was the middle of July. Cillian slowly woke up. He started his reluctant normal day by brushing his teeth and washing his face. As he was brushing his teeth and washing his face he realised he wasn’t visible in the mirror.
He first thought he had turned into a vampire but when he finished he couldn’t see his hands. He let out a huge scream. His parents rushed into the room and asked “Are you alright?” I quickly replied “No! I am invisible!” My parents let out a big scream of laughter and said that I was being ridiculous . As soon as I convinced them that I was invisible the laughing stopped. My Mum suggested I go to the doctor but I said that there wasn’t much point going to the doctor when he couldn’t see me. I started thinking of the possibilities of being invisible. I could rob a bank  I could trick my brother, although I knew my brother was not gullible. I tried to mess with him. I gave him a touch on his shoulder and when he realised no-one was there he screamed “GHOST!!!” and went crying to Mum. I told my Mum that I was messing with him,  Mom told him that there was a ghost going around and he locked himself in his room and cried non-stop for the next 2 weeks. Although being invisible was great fun my Mum was getting sick of it so she searched “How to be visible again” and to our surprise something came up. It was a drink that looked horrific. Recipe
When we came back we looked for Daniel and we found him curled up under his blankets and he didn’t come out of his room until his birthday the next year.
2 rotten eggs
A jug of spoiled milk 
Pickle
It said that it would be 2 weeks before you would be visible again. 2 Weeks Later
It was 2 weeks since I drank the horrific juice that was supposed to make me visible again and to my surprise it worked. I was visible again. Even though I lost an incredible power I was delighted celebrated by going on a 2 week holiday to Rio in Brazil. We were entering the  plane when we realised that we had forgot Daniel.
INVISIBLE by Mayhedhe Gazi It was another glorious summer’s afternoon in the beautiful state of Indiana . Billy, Tim and I were playing happily in the park and none of us had a care in the world . We like to think of ourselves as the scientists of the future. Making new inventions to test and to do funny things with always keeps us happy. We are lucky really as Billy’s dad sells lots of our new inventions in his shop and I don’t mean to boast but We are really starting to become well known all over Indiana. To say we are very proud of ourselves would be a bit of an understatement! Buying our equipment and utensils doesn’t come cheap so We help Billy’s dad in the store to earn as much extra money as we can.The shop has been open for 3 years now and Billy’s dad has made 2 million dollars in that short length of time. I think he’s a genius and without him our business would never exist-it would be invisible! The funny thing is that we are only 14 years of age-probably the youngest business men ever to come out of Indiana. Our biggest dream is to try and attempt to make an invisible potion.  

The next day we heard on the news that the a break in the bank .We did our best to make an invisible potion as quick as possible but the thing is it would have to set for an hour but we took it out half an hour . We then rushed to the bank and poured 3 bottles of our un set invisible potion.We didn’t know what the consequences are but we took a massive risk.We went inside the bank and saw the robbers inside., We gave the right box across the face and they were knocked out .The police  came and   took to the station. We had party and everything turned out perfectly. THE END. Invisible Trouble by Jack Duggan
It all happened yesterday I took a bath I dried myself and sent off to town it was raining. I was heading to Tesco and what caught my eye was a man who gave me a bag with no suspicion I ran with the bag it was a drink of water I drank and all I can see was my cloths not my body I took advantage of it. I went back to the place where I last seen the man a found him and I ran after him until he disappeared . I saw a house and ran to it and investigate.It was the man how gave me the bag!I ran over to him not thinking that I was invisible he said.Don't move I can see you im not an idiot but I do have a short term memory.      One more step and I will vanquish you where you will die so I dare you COME AT ME BRO! I shouted angrily SHUT UP! and cure me already he grabbed his magic wand and shot vanquishing bolts. I dodge to the left and countered to the right were I hit him the head.He toppled over helplessly where I proceeded to hit him. The cure rolled from under him and I grabbed it quickly.I ran away when I looked to see if he was chasing me I tripped on a rock he tried to jump on me but I kicked in the stomach and while he was rolling on the ground I drank the cure  and ran.As I ran he shouted You will have a curse that will be on you and your son and there son and so on. What what was I talking about?I ran back home and on the way I crossed a black cat I smashed a mirror on accident and ran under a ladder.But when I got home it was torn down what is going on?

Dark_Wizard_by_capprotti.jpg Invisible    By Cillian Cooke
It was a lovely Summers day.  The sun was shining happily and a gentle breeze was flowing through the air. Mick was listening to his Ipod playlist as he was on his way to the pub for a drink and a game of darts with a few friends. After an hour he came out of the pub quite tipsy. It started to rain and Mick stumbled into a shop for cover. He looked at the shelves where there were a variety of bottles, each bottle had a different colour liquid than the one before. He picked a random one and bought it. The owner charged Mick and gave him the bottle. He swallowed it down in one. It was nothing like what he tasted before. He thanked the owner and dashed home. He fell asleep the second his head touched the pillow.
Mick woke up feeling strange. He walked to work and on the way greeted everyone but they rudely ignored him and he continued to his office and worked. He overheard his boss belittling him. He shouted at the boss. But like everyone else the boss also ignored him. He was unhappy so he took an early lunch. He met some friends “Hi” he said but they ignored him and he shouted at the tops of his lungs “THATS IT I HAD ENOUGH OF THIS JOKE” But they just reacted the same, ignoring him. He stared at his hand or where his hand used to be. He tried to scream but nothing came out. He came up with many ideas of why it came off but one word came across his mind the most:

Invisible by Ryan Dyer He took his other glove off of his hand and he saw the same thing - nothing, he took his shoe off and where his foot used to be their was nothing, He felt amazed and terrified at the same time.
For a moment he thought of the fun he could have playing tricks on people. He ran to his friend Johns house. John was not there but as luck would have it he was just 1 mile away. John went in his house but Mick slipped in when the door was unlocked and opened. John turned the T.V on, took the remote and sat down on the recliner with a big sigh. He chose a documentary. Mick tip-toed to the light and turned them on and off. John at first thought nothing of it but as the lights turned on and off faster he paused the documentary and crept to the baseball bat he had ready. He picked it up and began shouting “Anyone there?” Mick stopped with the lights and proceeded with turning on the electronics in the kitchen. John grew quiet and sneaked to the kitchen and jumped in at the doorstep shouting “A HA!” but to Johns confusion he saw no one. Mick used this chance to dash to the door and run away from the scene.

Mick then went to his office. He first knocked down the reams of neatly stacked paper in the office he then continued with blowing party poppers around unsuspecting people. After that fun he travelled to a chipper and but when he got there he realized he faced a moral dilemma. He could not ask for the food because they can’t see or hear him but if he stole it would be surely still be wrong. He didn’t know what to do. He felt alone in the big world.
Then Mick heard a fading voice in the back of his head which was vaguely familiar, It was the shopkeeper he remembered he said “The invisibility effect while only last a few more days”. Mick gave a sigh of relief. He thought he would make the most out of being invisible while it lasted and have as much fun as he could.

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Invisible by Naoise Hopkins and William Maughan
A 5 chapter mystery adventure by Naoise Hopkins and William Maughan. Illustrated by Naoise Hopkins and William Maughan.


Chapter 1 The Beginning
On Halloween night in the city of Dublin Ireland 2 brothers, 15 year old Waytt (dressed in a santa hat and a garda uniform)and 10 year old George(with a teapot on his head for an elephants trunk)were at a Halloween party, when Waytt accidentally spilled some punch on the school bully James Kragster.He chased the 2 boys around town, when they came across a strange hedge wall.The bully pushed them into the wall and the 2 brothers fell unconsciously into the river.


Chapter 2 The Unknown

When they woke up, they found out they were lost in a place called the unknown, a place where everything is invisible.They met a woodsman with a moustache and a German accent who told them he lost his  German-American daughter and told them to take a left turn to get home.The boys found out they took the wrong way.Before they went back a talking American bluebird named Bessie(who is really a human)decided to help them get back home.

Chapter 3 Journey across the 7 seas

The 3 boarded a ferry  that had frogs, skeletons with pumpkins for clothes and people made out of vegetables.The ship had accidentally sunk into the water and they all had to make a swim for it.When the 3 survived, they found the spirit of the island of  who would grant them wishes.


Chapter 4 The mysterious spirit

When they came across the spirit, she said they would get 3 wishes. Bessie wished for her and her family to be human again. George wished for the woodman's daughter to return. And Waytt wished for him and George to return to Dublin until a voice came behind him which said Waytt George x3.

Chapter 5 It was all just a dream


A girl named Susie woke them up at the hospital and told them they were having a bad dream.Waytt told her about what happened in the dream and said it was crazy.Susie calmed both of them down by giving George some sweets
and kissing Waytt on the lips.That concludes our 5 chapter mystery adventure of invisibility.

The end


Invisible by Adam Khier
Hi my name is Anthony and I’m going to tell you about a very interesting day i had.

Beep!Beep!Beep! I woke up or rather my alarm clock woke me up . time to get ready for school i thought . I dragged myself out of bed and slowly got changed . I combed my hair quickly and I grabbed my bag and lunch and I dashed out the door.

A little while later I ran up to Stacey’s house (Stacey’s my girlfriend) I started talking to her about teachers but her laughs were only mere sniggers. “HEY do you want to go to a party tonight” I said. “Look” she said “There’s someone else I’m sorry but I think we should stop seeing each other”. “WHAT” I said. “Goodbye” she muttered walking away leaving me confused, upset and  angry.

When I got to school late Professor Vector my geography teacher told me to wait in his office when he came in he gave me a long speech  about being on time during this speech i was wishing to be invisible.

Eventually I got back into the class i was supposed to be   in. Professor Cogan gave me another long speech only this one was worse as it was in front of the class  I was so mortified. I was once again wishing to be invisible.

When the bell rang I ran outside. Something was glittering on the ground it was a drink can “All your troubles will disappear and so will you” It said on the label. Probably a prank I thought  I was about  to  walk away when I looked at the shinning can  it was like it was beckoning me forward I slowly picked it up and carefully and opened it the drink was an electric sort of blue I took a long sip. Not bad i thought but it didn't work.

I strolled back feeling annoyed and upset but  my troubles were only about to get worse Drederick  a boy with arms the size of gorillas and a face like one two  was coming my way he’s  the school bully I suddenly wanted to be invisible I  braced myself for  the hit but it didn’t come  I looked down at the rest of me checking for any bruises but the rest of me was gone i quickly ran to the bathroom and looked in the mirror looking back at me was nothing. I could finally get revenge starting with Stacey.

Lucky for me I could turn invisible at will so I was at music class [the noisiest class of the day and I turned invisible and tiptoed out of the class slowly and gently closed the door. I ran to Stacey’s  locker I knew the code as Stacey had been talking to me here on many occasions I put it in and of course it opened I slipped in a mouse I got from science class and hide in a place I could see everything.

Firstly Stacey opened the locker. Secondly the mouse jumped up and landed on her shoulder. Thirdly she fell back and hit the fire alarm all the students came out running and screaming as the sprinklers came on. Suddenly a phrase Professor Cogan told me at the start of the year struck a chord the phrase went like power corrupts power corrupts absolutely absolute power corrupts absolutely.

I walked outside and found the can and red the back of it “Effects were of in 2 hours.”

not long left i thought and  I emptied the can and threw it into the bin.

So thats the story and I have two more words to say……

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